Wednesday, January 21, 2009

Writing Winning College Admissions Essays

By Daniel Z. Kane

While not the most important documents in your admissions file, good essays can be the difference between receiving the decision you want and the decision you dread. And, they may be most important at the extremely selective colleges and universities, where virtually all applicants display similarly impressive grade point averages, class rank, and standardized test scores.

Moderately selective colleges do not generally agonize over essays. For the most part, they just want to be sure that applicants can write pretty well and put together a few coherent thoughts. Highly selective colleges may be looking for something that sets an applicant apart from others with a similar level of high academic achievement.

Except in highly unusual circumstances, an essay will not compensate for failure to complete a rigorous college prep program or for grades significantly below the majority of applicants. And, in most instances, statements which offer excuses for below potential academic performance will not be well received. Neither will statements promising that you will earn a 4.0 grade point average, someday become an outstanding alumnus, or lead the football to four record breaking seasons. Save your excuses and grandiose self-assessment for someone who cares, or at least someone who hasn't heard it all before.

Take advantage of the chance essays give you to introduce yourself by:

1. Be as articulate and thoughtful as possible, without sounding stilted. Have others proofread and critique your work until it is your best work.

2. Talking about yourself honestly. In fact, talking about an instance in which you learned from a mistake or by falling short of a goal may well make you both more likeable and more credible (especially if there is a "happy ending").

3. Telling the committee anything you want them to know which is not included elsewhere in your admissions file.

4. Being certain to avoid sounding like one of the transparent beauty queens who thinks she'll help her case by talking about God, her parents, her patriotism, and her commitment to world peace.

Very seldom will an essay make a good candidate out of a bad one. Unfortunately, the reverse is far more likely. That being said, it is important to follow the basic guideline above, and avoid any big risks. - 16928

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